December 5, 2011
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Palmist
Palm hovers above the deck
to draw at last this shining cardon this sunlit lazy day we lived
what is now long since forgottenmelancholia makes us see again
that platitudes are static
while understanding of them wends its way through infinite angles
precessing alchemypcw.05.december.2011
Comments (39)
i like how you string contrasting words together to paint some kind of feeling that i can’t quite name.
sounds and looks pretty even though the feeling isn’t.
@promisesunshine - i had an extra stanza for this one, did lots more of that, but decided in the end it was more redundant than rap…
but I deal from the bottom of the deck
@godfatherofgreenbay - anything to make the deal better.
@complicatedlight - yea, only that makes me need to read the redundant stanza.
i could really use one of those shining cards right about now…
Lovely.
life can be so wonderful…:)
on another note, looking at it in my newsfeed I thought your profile picture was a jelly-fish
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Good one.
Feeling better?
@drawmafreezone - i’ll never tell… OH ALL RIGHT YOU WIN.
@complicatedlight - I hadn’t realized we were competing… but it’s still nice to win. It’d be nicer to know you’re feeling amazingly well today
@drawmafreezone - LOL i’m feeling fine, thank you m’dear.
@complicatedlight -
my my…
@mercurious_v1 - hi there, tashie
Interesting. ..And i find your polar bear logo fascinating for some reason.
@lyrycsyntyme - thank you. it was a gift. it’s special to me.
@complicatedlight - You’re welcome, it’s very unique, indeed!
“Platitudes are static.”
You are, as ever, awesome.
wow!!! this is really incredible!!!!
@moritheil - hi, mori. nice to see you around
man, those pain pills rock.
I love the word alchemy. This is a good poem for today.
Why is your username yelling in my inbox? It looks the same as always on here.
@ordinarybutloud - because last time i accidentally signed on with caps lock engaged. there. i re-signed on. that should fix it.
also, thanks.
I didn’t know you could do that. Now I have to try it.
Did it work???
@ordinarybutloud - yep. in footprints you’re ALL CAPS BABY.
here in comments, not so much.
@complicatedlight - Inbox? Am I YELLING IN THE INBOX???
IN MESSAGES? NO YOU DON’T SEEM TO BE. I DIDN’T MENTION IT CUZ I FIGURED YOU MEANT FOOTPRINTS CUZ IF I HAD A QUARTER FOR EVERY TIME SOMEONE MISTOOK “INBOX” FOR “FOOTPRINTS” I’D BE RETIRED ON A
oops.
beach somewhere.
YOu ALWAYS have so many replies before I get to you.
I feel like standing in a corner and drinking a shot of something…anything.
No, not poison.
@z_stands_for - i guess you just need to get up earlier, huh?
nice writing. ~ greetings fr. mississippi.
@mississipppi - hey there, miz ippi. that’s m i crookedlettercrookedletter i crookedlettercrookedletter i double p i
wait. triple p?
mmm…nice profile pic.
waitaminute…are you really there?
a palmist? hmm.. bizzare! you can touch me somewhere else if ya waaaaant! Hehe I bet it’ll give a better reading of me!
I am struggling with an addiction to solitaire and you had to post this! Now I must find a deck of cards and a table….
@Aloysius_son - i saw your pics. i’m thinking both items should be around there somewhere.